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magic, in dog years by `radiophonic:iconradiophonic:



Magic, in Dog Years

Lets go off to the gypsy's store
and buy a bottle of 1970 chicanery.

We're fermenting, old boy.

We, dusty old throw pillows
from the last decade -
still sleeping on tattered couches.

Yet the Gypsy sees how bright we are
like grapes ripened by a long gone sun -
glimmering in tandem
with her sequined veil
dangling before her eyes.

We know the truth, old dog.

We're ever so faithful riddles
and drunk on our own beliefs
our own answers and truths -
waltzing through words,
trying to give it all away.

Meditate!

The Gypsy's truth is a trick of the eye,
under florescent lights.
Yet, even a false light provides warmth
in the company of strangers
so we drink her tricks wholeheartedly
to keep our feet moving
and our glasses full.
©2006-2009 `radiophonic
:iconradiophonic:

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Version 1 - May, 2006
Version 2 - August, 2006

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:iconbeea20:
any chance you could copy the first two stanzas here for me ? :) .. so i can read too?
:iconradiophonic:
Sure thing, Bee.

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Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead.
Baa, star child.
:iconszpilman:
The way I got the plot outline - I think of it as a fully important message.
But let's leave the storyboard alone. It is very fluent, never mind the physical interruptions - it's got a soft line of concealed text inbetween the things said. It means a great deal to me.
:iconstarsdie:
you did it again -
a fav :aww:
:iconbeea20:
:) :) ... now to request this of everyone else who's poems i want to read... sigh... :( (v4 i miss you!)
:iconhappyella:
i don't understand new DA. how, pray, do i read your poems?

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mediocre people do exceptional things all the time
:iconradiophonic:
:( Another person who can't read them?

I believe you'll need to use FireFox or click the 'download' button up there.

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Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead.
Baa, star child.
:iconashellessmind:
Ah, you have such clever poetry. Its always refreshing to read. "a glass of chicanery" - its definitely an interesting idea.

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Harmonize your inward and your outward life, and you soul will know no bounds of joy.
:iconhappyella:
ohh. thanks.

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mediocre people do exceptional things all the time

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